老舍《养花》英译赏析

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老舍《养花》英译赏析

　　《养花》一文是老舍先生1956年给报刊写的一篇散文，刊载在1956年12月12日的《文艺报》上。通过写养花的过程，表达了养花的乐趣：有喜有忧，有笑有泪，有花有果，有香有色。既须劳动又长见识。抒发了作者热爱生活的思想感情。全文按由事到理的顺序，层层递进，揭示了全文的主旨。下面是小编整理的老舍《养花》英译赏析，一起来看看吧。

　　养花

　　On Growing Flowers

　　老舍

　　Lao She

　　我爱花，所以也爱养花(1)。我可还没成为养花专家，因为没有工夫去作研究与试验。我只把养花当作生活中的一种乐趣，花开的大小好坏都不计较，只要开花我就高兴。在我的小院中，到夏天，满是花草，小猫儿们只好上房去玩耍(2)，地上没有它们的运动场。

　　I love flowers and hence have taken to growing them. But, short of time to do research and experiment in flower cultivation, I am no gardener at all. I merely take flower cultivation as a pleasure of life. I really don’t care whether or not my flowers will put forth plump and nice-looking blossom. I’ll be delighted as long as they can blossom. In summer, flowers and plants growing in luxuriance in my small courtyard will leave little open space as a playground for the little cats, so they have to sport about in our rooms instead.

　　要点：

　　1，先说标题，此处并没有单纯译为Growing flowers，而是加了on(此处表“关于”)，因为本文并不单单是说养花这家事情，而是通过写“养花”表达自己对于知识的重视

　　2， “所以也爱养花“译为hence have taken to growing them，其中动词短语to take to的意思是“开始喜欢”。此句也可译为are therefore fond of growing flowers。

　　3， Put forth在这里重提一下，意为“长出(花叶芽)”已经是老朋友了哦~

　　4， “只好上房去玩耍”译为they have to sport about in our rooms instead，其中动词短语to sport about的意思是“嬉戏”(to play and jump about happily)。

　　花虽多，但无奇花异草。珍贵的花草不易养活，看着一棵好花生病欲死是件难过的事。我不愿时时落泪。北京的气候，对养花来说，不算很好。冬天冷，春天多风，夏天不是干旱就是大雨倾盆;秋天最好，可是忽然会闹霜冻。在这种气候里，想把南方的好花养活，我还没有那么大的本事。因此，我只养些好种易活、自己会奋斗的花草(3)。

　　I grow many flowers, but none of them are exotic or rare ones. It is difficult to grow a precious flower species. And I feel bad to see a good flower dying of illness. I don’t want often to shed tears over that. But Beijing’s climate is more or less unfit for the growing of flowers. Freezing in winter, windy in spring, and either too dry or too often visited by rainstorms in summer. While autumn is the best of all, it is often plagued by a sudden frost. In a climate like this, it is far beyond my capacity to grow precious flowers of southern breed. Therefore, I only grow flowers and plants that are hardy and enjoy a high survival rate.

　　要点：

　　1，“花虽多，但无奇花异草。”注意此句的主语的选取，译文选取“我”作为主语来串句子，还是找共同部分，看选哪个主语有助于行文~“奇花异草”意为“指稀奇少见的花草”因此译为exotic or rare flowers

　　2，“我只养些好种易活、自己会奋斗的花草”译时稍作灵活处理：I only grow flowers and plants that are hardy and enjoy a high survival rate，其中用enjoy a high survival rate(成活率高)表达“好种易活”;用hardy(耐寒、耐劳、能吃苦)表达“会奋斗的”。行文生动活泼~

　　3，“冬天冷，春天多风，夏天不是干旱就是大雨倾盆;秋天最好，可是忽然会闹霜冻。”译为Freezing in winter, windy in spring, and either too dry or too often visited by rainstorms in summer. While autumn is the best of all, it is often plagued by a sudden frost.原文语言简洁生动，而译者用平行结构也是寥寥几笔就将原文意思表达清楚了。另外，原文中的“闹”运用拟人的修辞，译文也用visit生动地体现了出来~

　　不过，尽管花草自己会奋斗(4)，我若置之不理，任其自生自灭(5)，它们多数还是会死了的。我得天天照管它们，像好朋友似的关切他们。一来二去(6)，我摸着一些门道：有的喜阴，就别放在太阳地里，有的喜干，就别多浇水。

　　Although such flowers are able to weather through by themselves, I, however never ignore them or abandon them to their own fate, for otherwise most of them will probably end up dead. I have to care for them every day as if they were my close friends. Thus, in the course of time, I’ve somehow got the hang of flower cultivation, some flowers which are accustomed to growing in the shade should not be too much exposed to the sun. Those which prefer dryness should not be watered too often.

　　要点：

　　1，“自己会奋斗”即“自力更生”译为able to weather through by themselves，其中动词短语to weather(表示平安地度过，比go高级一大截~) through的意思是“对付困难”、“渡过风暴”等。此句也可译为able to carry on the struggle for existence by themselves，但意思太大，不太符合本文的语言风格，也比较啰嗦

　　2，“任其自生自灭”中的“自生自灭”意为“自然地发生，生长，又自然地消灭”，此处不宜按字面直译，现意译为abandon them to their own fate。

　　3，“一来二去”的意思是“经过一定的时间”，故译为in the course of time，course又一次出现~是翻译中常用的梗~具体用法见《艰难的国运与雄健的国民》

　　4，got the hang of意为“找到…的窍门”如;The Eurozone authorities seem to have finally got the hang of an effective communications strategy, and this has paid off.(欧元区当局看来已最终掌握了沟通策略，而这已见效。)

　　5，“喜阴。喜干”意为“适应潮湿/干燥的环境”因此译者分别用了accustom to和prefer来表达此意

　　这是个乐趣，摸住门道花草养活了，而且三年五载(7)老活着、开花，多么有意思呀!不是乱吹，这就是知识呀!多得些知识，一定不是坏事。

　　It gives me much pleasure to know the right way of handling them. How interesting it is to be able to keep my flowers and plants alive and watch them thrive and bloom year in year out! It is no exaggeration to say that there is much knowledge involved in this! And the more knowledge one acquires, the better it is of course.

　　要点：

　　1，“三年五载”以灵活的办法译为year in year out(每年)，类似的表达还有day in(and) day out(每天)~相较于every year, everyday,前者更加适合文学翻译

　　2，“不是乱吹，这就是知识呀”意即“我可没有夸张哦，这的确有很多知识在里面!”故译为It is no exaggeration to say that there is much knowledge involved in this!要知道，老舍写这篇文章的目的是通过养花这件事说明知识的重要性~翻译时一定不要按字面意思来译

　　3，“多得些知识，一定不是坏事”译为And the more knowledge one acquires, the better it is of course.采用反话正说的手法，巧妙地将作者重视知识的语气表现地淋漓尽致~

　　我不是有腿病吗，不但不利于行，也不利于久坐。我不知道花草们受我的照顾，感谢我不感谢;我可得感谢它们。在我工作的时候，我总是写了几十个字，就到院中去看看，浇浇这棵，搬搬那盆，然后回到屋中再写一点，然后再出去，如此循环(8)，把脑力劳动与体力劳动结合到一起，有益身心(9)，胜于吃药。

　　As I have some trouble with my leg, I can’t move around easily, nor can I sit too long. I don’t know if the flowers under my care are grateful to me or not. However, I wish for my part to acknowledge my thanks to them. I often leave off sedentary work after writing a few dozen words and go to the courtyard to take a look at the flowers, watering them and moving about the potted ones. Then I’ll return to my room to write a bit more. I’ll go through the same back-and-forth process again and again, thus combining mental with manual labour. This is a better way to keep me fit in mind and body than taking medicine.

　　要点：

　　1， “我不是有腿病吗”即“我有腿病”，译为 I have some trouble with my leg，此处用疑问的句式表达肯定的观点，译为陈述句~

　　2， “不但不利于行，也不利于久坐”运用“否定+nor”的结构，这个之前在《我坐了木船》中有详细介绍，忘记的童鞋请穿越~~另外，此句和前面的分句有逻辑上的因果关系，下面的“不知…我可得感谢它们”也有逻辑上的转折，翻译时要体现体现体现出来~!

　　3， “我可得感谢它们”译为I wish for my part to acknowledge my thanks to them，其中for my part是插入语，意为“就我而言”;“感谢”译为acknowledge thanks to，这个句型在领导人们的讲话上也常用~

　　4，“然后再出去，如此循环”不宜按字面直译，现译为I’ll go through the same back-and-forth process again and again，其中定语back-and-forth作“来来往往”解;go through the same process作“重复同一过程”解。

　　5，“有益身心”可有两种译法：to keep me fit in mind and body或to keep me mentally and physically fit。

　　要是赶上狂风暴雨或天气突变哪，就得全家动员(10)，抢救花草，十分紧张(11)。几百盆花，都要很快地抢到屋里去，使人腰酸腿疼，热汗直流。

　　In case of a violent storm or a sudden change of weather, however, the whole family will have to turn out to salvage the flowers and plants. Everybody will then feel keyed up. By the time when we have managed to move the several hundred potted flowers to the rooms in a hurry, we will be dog-tired and wet with perspiration.

　　要点：

　　1，“就得全家动员”译为the whole family will have to turn out，其中动词短语to turn out的意思是“出动”或“出来参加”。

　　2，“十分紧张”译为feel keyed up，其中动词短语to key up的意思是“使紧张”，因此keyed up和excited、tense等同义

　　3，“几百盆花，都要很快地抢到屋里去，使人腰酸腿疼，热汗直流”译为By the time when we have managed to move the several hundred potted flowers to the rooms in a hurry, we will be dog-tired and wet with perspiration.其中译者并没有具体地翻译这两个四字格，而译成了dog-tired(极度疲乏，像狗一样累)和wet with perspiration(汗珠，汗)。不仅传达了原文信息，又保留生动的形象~

　　第二天，天气好转，又得把花儿都搬出去，就又一次腰酸腿疼，热汗直流。可是，这多么有意思!不劳动，连棵花儿也养不活，这难道不是真理么?

　　The next day, when the weather is fine, we will have another round of being dog-tired and wet with perspiration in taking all the flowers out to the courtyard again. How interesting it is! Isn’t it true that without doing manual labour, we couldn’t even keep a single flower alive?

　　要点：

　　1，“又…”译为have another round of doing

　　2,“不劳动，连棵花儿也养不活，这难道不是真理么?”反问句，译为一般疑问句Isn’t it true that without doing manual labour, we couldn’t even keep a single flower alive? 将语言的运用发挥到淋漓尽致~

　　送牛奶的同志，进门就夸“好香”!这使我们全家都感到骄傲。赶到昙花开放的时候，约几位朋友来看看，更有秉烛夜游的神气(12)——昙花总在夜里放蕊。花儿分根了，一棵分为数棵，就赠给朋友们一些;看着友人拿走自己的劳动果实，心里自然特别喜欢。

　　It filled the whole family with pride whenever the milkman exclaims on entering our gate, “What a sweet smell!” When the night-blooming cereuses are about to be in flower, we will invite some friends to visit us in the evening to feast their eyes on them—in an atmosphere smacking of nocturnal merry-making under candle lights. When the cereuses have branched out, we will pick some of the flowers and give them as a present to our friends. We are of course especially happy to see them take away our fruits of labour.

　　要点：

　　1，又出现了表示“使某人感到…”的句子了，这次是fill sb with,迄今为止，我们已经见过的表达有：generate in sb a feeling/sensation of ;give sb great pleasure(使某人愉悦);inspire sb by(使某人振奋)~

　　2,“更有秉烛夜游的神气”中的“秉灯夜游”是成语，比喻“及时行乐”，今结合上下文按“夜间秉烛作乐”的意思译为nocturnal(夜间活动的，夜间发生的) merry-making(作乐) under candle lights。又“更有……神气”意即“带有……的味道”，故全句译为in an atmosphere smacking of nocturnal merry-making under candle lights.

　　当然，也有伤心的时候，今年夏天这有这么一回。三百株菊秧还在地上(没有移入盆中的时候)，下了暴雨。邻家的墙倒了下来，菊秧被砸死者约三十多种，一百多棵!全家都几天没有笑容!

　　有喜有忧，有笑有泪，有花有实，有香有色，既须劳动，又长见识，这就是养花的乐趣。

　　Of course, there is a time to feel sad too. Last summer, a rainstorm hit us when 300 chrysanthemum seedlings in the courtyard were about to be transplanted to pots. Suddenly, the wall of our neighbour collapsed and crushed more than 100 seedlings of 30 varieties. The whole family were sad-faced for quiet a few days!

　　Joy and sorrow, laughter and tears, flowers and fruit, fragrance and colour, manual labour and increased knowledge—all these make up the joy of flower cultivation.

　　要点：

　　1，“有喜有忧，有笑有泪，有花有实，有香有色”译为Joy and sorrow, laughter and tears, flowers and fruit, fragrance and colour, 译文在翻译“有…,有…”句式时采用直接列举的方式，更简洁更符合原文轻快的气氛~

　　2，“既须劳动，又长见识”运用词性转换，译为manual labour and increased knowledge，也是为了贴合原文的氛围~

　　赏析

　　Successful literary works have a common feature, that is, there is a layer of meaning beyond the literal meaning, that is, what the ancients said "there is something in the words, implied meaning and implied meaning". It seems that the writer did not want to express this meaning, which we realized when reading.

　　The title of this essay is "raising flowers", and there is no place in the whole essay to leave raising flowers. However, between the lines, we heard another voice of the author: "how interesting life is! How beautiful life is! Without labor, you can't even raise a flower. Isn't this the truth?" It is simply a hymn of life, full of love for beautiful things and love for life. The writer just doesn't mention it literally, but every word contains it.

　　Because this prose has such overtones and rhymes, it will make people feel endless and charming!

　　Where did this insinuation come from? It comes from the author's heart, it is the author's voice.

　　If Mr. Lao she didn't love his new life so much, and if he didn't have such a kind and beautiful heart, he couldn't make such an implied sound.

　　His heart is too beautiful and kind. He loves beautiful things too much. He was sad to see a good peanut dying of disease; Rescuing the flowers and plants in the wind and rain, he was so tired that his back was aching and his legs were aching and he was sweating. He felt unspeakably interesting; He would even thank the flowers and grasses because they gave him happiness... The love for beautiful things in his prose stems from Lao She's beautiful heart.

　　Therefore, the first image created by literary creation is the author's own image. Creation is to open your heart to others. This is especially true of lyric prose and poetry. Only a beautiful heart can sing a beautiful song. The cultivation of art is inseparable from the cultivation of personality. Lu You said that the Kung Fu of writing poetry is outside the poetry. That's what he meant.

　　"Raising flowers" is written very naturally and smoothly. It seems to be casually said in front of friends, like the natural flow of clear spring. There is no trace of knife and axe.

　　However, it pays attention to structure and layout. The whole chapter is inseparable from the cultivation of flowers. The levels are very clear. We can talk about the hobby of flower cultivation, the hard work of flower cultivation, the happiness of flower cultivation, or the sadness of flower cultivation... There are comparisons and changes. In the last paragraph, a few numbers make the finishing touch, clarify the theme and close the full text, so as to make the whole article an inseparable whole.

　　成功的文学作品有一个共同的特点，就是在字面之外还有一层意思，也就是古人说的“话中有话、言外之意、弦外之音”。似乎作家并不曾要表达这种意思，是我们在阅读时体味到的。

　　这篇散文的题目是“养花”，全篇也没有一处离开养花。但是，在字里行间，我们又听到作者另一个声音：“生活是多么有趣啊！生活是多么美好啊！不劳动，连棵花也养不活，这难道不是真理吗？”它简直就是一篇生活的赞歌，洋溢着对美的事物的喜爱、对生活的热爱。作家只是字面上没有提到这个意思，可是每个字又都包含着这个意思。

　　这篇散文因为有了这样的弦外之音、韵外之致，才会让人感到味之不尽，富有魅力吧！

　　这种弦外之音是打哪里来的呢？它是打作者的心里传出来的，它是作者的心声。

　　若是老舍先生不是这般打心眼里热爱新生活，若是他没有那样一颗善良、美好的心灵，他是发不出这样的弦外之音的。

　　他心地太美、太善良了，他太爱美好的东西了。他看着一棵好花生病欲死就难过；抢救风雨中的花草，累得腰酸腿疼、热汗直流，他感到说不出的有意思；他甚至会感谢起花草来，因为它们给了他快乐……散文中流露出的对美好事物的热爱正是源于老舍的那颗美好的心。

　　所以，文学创作塑造的第一个形象就是作者自己的形象。创作就是把自己的心打开给人看。以抒情为主的散文、诗歌尤其是这样。只有美丽的心才能唱出美丽的歌。艺术的修养离不开人格的修养。陆游说写诗的功夫在诗外，就是这个意思吧。

　　《养花》写得非常自然、流畅，像是面对朋友随随便便讲出来的，像是清泉自然而然流泻出来的，看不到一点刀斧痕迹。

　　然而，它又很讲究结构、讲究布局。全篇不离养花，层次十分分明，或谈养花的爱好，或谈养花的辛苦，或谈养花的快乐，或谈养花的忧伤……有对比，有变化。最后一段，寥寥数字，画龙点睛，明确题旨，收束全文，使全篇成为一个不可分割的整体。

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