英语作文真题详细分析

发布时间:2017-06-16 编辑:颖瑜

  有些读者希望小编整理一下英语的作文真题分析,为此小编收集了一篇真题的详细分析,欢迎大家阅读!

  Directions:

  Study the following drawing carefully and write an essay in which you should:

  1) describe the drawing,

  2) interpret its meaning, and

  3) support your view with examples.

  You should write about 200 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.

  真题分析:

  本题承袭了考研漫画内容简洁、寓意深刻的风格。一个满头大汗的运动员正冲破了一次长跑比赛的终点,而在终点的不远处,赫然标着两个大字“起点”。通过漫画的题目“终点又是新起点”,考生很容易就可以抓住本题的中心论点:在人生道路上,我们不能仅仅满足于一两次的成功,而只有不断地追求,我们才能取得进步和发展。这也符合哲学上事物是不断发展的这一趋势和真理。针对这类人生奋斗类的题型,一般提纲都会要求考生举出事例,即使提纲没有要求,考生最好也能够写出一两个事例,以增强文章的说服力。一般来说,在这种情况下,举残疾人、先进人物等的例子会比较切题,有效地加强文章的力度。

  范文:

  The picture presents a young runner who just finishes a long run and arrives at the finish line, sweating and smiling. While he stand at the end, a sign stating “beginning” lies not far away from his position, indicating that “an end means a new beginning”.

  It is true that when a runner reaches the end of one race, he needs to realize that his immediate task is how to achieve the next goal, instead of indulging the past glory and accomplishment. The identical truth applies to every individual, organization, and nation, that setting new goals continuously is the source of advancement.

  The deaf and mute American girl Helen Keller is a typical example of our case, as she had spent her whole life struggling and striving for one goal after another. It is not surprising that she finally turned out to be an excellent writer. Equally, businesses and industries should keep setting new tasks in order to preserve their competitiveness. Microsoft, for instance, never ceases creating new products the company launched Vista, Office 2007 and Exchange Server recently though it is already being such a huge conglomerate. In short, it is non-stop efforts that lead to progress.

  译文:

  该图展示了一个运动员刚完成一场赛跑、达到终点,他满头大汗但是却非常满意地微笑着。在他所站的终点标志附近,该图标出了“起点”的标志,说明了“终点是新的起点”。

  确实,当一个运动员跑到终点的时候,他必须马上意识到他的下一个任务是达到新的目标,而不是沉湎于过去的荣耀和成就。同样的道理也适用于每一个个人、组织、以及国家,即不断地设立新的目标才能不断地前进。

  聋哑的美国女孩海伦.凯勒是这方面的一个典型例子,因为她一生都在为一个接一个的目标而努力和奋斗。因此,她最后变成了一个优秀的作家并不令人惊讶。同样的,工商界如果想要保持它们的竞争力,就要不断地为自己设立新任务。例如,微软公司作为如此大型的一个集团,也从来没有停止创造新产品的脚步,该公司在最近发布了Vista, Office 2007 和Exchange Server三大产品。总的来说,永不停止的努力才能引领进步和发展。

  闪光词汇及词组:

  sweating and smiling: 这里我们要介绍英语中的一种特殊的修辞方法,叫做alliteration,即“头韵”。一般在汉语以及英语中我们讲究压尾韵,而英语中经常可以把一些开头的辅音相同的单词组合在一起,读起来也非常琅琅上口。考生如果能在平时有意识地收集这些头韵组合,在考试中用上一两个,会大大为文章添彩。类似的短语还有我们在“经典应用文背诵”部分中提到的safe and sound。“He has more brawn than brain”,他四肢发达头脑简单。

  achieve: v. 达到,完成

  glory: n. 荣耀,光荣

  accomplishment: n. 成就

  identical: adj. 同一的,同样的

  advancement: n. 前进,进步

  turn out to be: 变成

  conglomerate: n. 大集团

  launch: v. 发行,投放市场

  non-stop: adj. 不停的

  万能句型:

  The picture presents…

  It is true that…

  …is a typical example of our case

  … it is not surprising that…

  … Equally…

  In short…

最新推荐
热门推荐