澳洲留学申请写作3条注意事项

发布时间:2017-07-27 编辑:张莉

  大家都知道,要想要去澳大利亚留学,不仅需要符合澳洲大学语言成绩要求,留学文书也是必不可少的一环,下面小编就为大家介绍一下澳洲留学申请写作3条注意事项,供大家参考。

  1.澳大利亚大学的录取方式和标准与咱们国内有很大不同

  国内升学,从小学、初中、高中到大学、研究生、博士,每上一个台阶都要经过相关部门的严格考试。所谓“千军万马过独木桥”,说的就是这种情况。反观澳大利亚大学,并没有入学考试,因此申请文件就显得格外重要。它们往往是澳大利亚大学教授了解你学习经历、性格品质、工作经验和专业水平的惟一媒介和手段。

  2.在吸引教授眼球和争取录取上,申请材料的优劣与各种考试成绩同等重要

  许多申请人花费大量的时间和金钱来准备各种考试,以为拿到高分就万事大吉了,其实不然。理想的托福、雅思成绩只不过是对你语言运用能力的一种体现,能在申请材料中起到锦上添花的作用,但它不能反映出一个人的专业素质和才干,而这些恰恰正是教授急于了解的。

  3.一份漂亮的申请材料能够充分展示你的优势

  体现你的成就、抱负和个人品德,能够弥补你大学成绩、工作经验甚至是学历的不足,令你在众多申请者中脱颖而出,尽快拿到通知书,大大加快留学进程。

  申请书范文:

  To live a meaningful life everyday; to continually pursue my predetermined worthwhile goals. -My view of life.

  Could I put myself in the life-threatening working environment? Could I sacrifice my life for the benefits of others? Some people may laugh at my crazy question. To me, that is a serious question I have come a long way to find my answer. “I am not sure whether it is worth to answer”; “What is the true meaning of that question?”

  When I was a young child, I watched a soap opera that was about court. I was deeply impressed by the judge’s calmness and the lawyer’s eloquence and resource that were showed in this opera. From then on, I hoped to study law some day. Fortunately, I performed well in entrance examination and got enrolled into xx University. Then I chose law as my major without hesitation. At university, I studied hard and got GPA 3.4. What’s more, I broadly read all kinds of books, including philosophy, history etc. My teachers’ instruction strengthened my understanding of law and makes me understand the significance of law to a country. From my studies, I had a lot of fun and got more interested in law. Moreover, I actively participated in practice in holidays from common company to law firm and tried to apply the theory I had learned into practice.

  This summer, I had my internship in counselor department in xxx Group Co Ltd which was involved in a business contract dispute, which was submitted to China International Economic and Trade Arbitration Commission for arbitration. As a representative of the requested applicant, I took part in the evidence collection in the early arbitration stage and clearly explained why the 5% balance of goods was not paid on time. After knowing the whole case, I visited my teacher, an Arbitration Law professor, and listened to her opinions. Realizing the counterpart didn’t completely implement their contract duty, I gave reasons as follows: First, the counterpart company didn’t mention bearing issue, which caused that the delivered machines couldn’t be put into the plant because of the disqualification of workshop. Thus overhaul was necessary, which delayed production and resulted loss. Based on these reasons, the counterpart didn’t completely carry out its duty, so our party did not pay the balance on time. During this time, I found out the evidence and pictures that attested counterpart did not give reasonable suggestion and service, and made a statement in the court. Finally, the arbitration turned out that counterpart compensated our loss, in which the arbiters invoked the reasons that I stated. They had a panel made up of 3 lawyers and 5 company representatives as agents while we just had 3 persons—two lawyers and me. Under such condition, I was able to cooperate with them and clearly stated my opinions without any nervousness, which got their respect. This matter greatly inspired my enthusiasm on study.

  In addition, I took part in the contact draft in several companies. In the process, when I met a lot of problems, I often turned to my teachers for help, which made good impression on them. As I cherished each practice, I studied my specialty and English hard. With effective study method and diligence, I did well both in English and law, which helped me a lot to get scholarship every year. On the other hand, my practice inspired me to study. In practice, I exercised my legal knowledge. I also realize the big gap between theory and its application—sometimes I have master the rules but I didn’t know how to use it in actual case. My practice experiences have not only strengthened what I learned but have supplied new knowledge for me, which is good for my future study and career.

  In my study and practice, I admired outstanding lawyers’ eloquence and jumping thinking more and more. However, in China, most of lawyers come from theory study and those who can perform well in practice are insufficient. Moreover, after the China’s entrance to WTO, there are a lot of problems with Chinese law. I think, my internship experience is not enough. In practice, I could combine substantive law with procedural law to analyze case, but I still feel my theoretical foundation is not solid enough. What’s more, comparably speaking, the chances that I have to initiatively study and practice are not a lot. Thereby, I am eager to study further abroad to know more about foreign law, thoughts and lawyer career so that I am able to stand out in fierce competition.

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