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英语四级写作常见错误分析
在日常的学习中,大家最熟悉的就是知识点吧?知识点也可以通俗的理解为重要的内容。为了帮助大家掌握重要知识点,以下是小编精心整理的英语四级写作常见错误分析知识点,欢迎阅读,希望大家能够喜欢。
一、错误类型及其修改
1.句子成分残缺
We always working till late at night before taking exams.(误)
We are always working till late at night before taking exams(正)
2.句子成分多余
This test is end, but there is another test is waiting forus. (误)
One test ends, but another is waiting for you. (正)
3.主谓不一致
Someone/Somebody think that reading should be selective. (误)
Someone/Somebody thinks that reading should be selective. (正)
4.动词时态误用
I was walking along the road, and there are not so many cars on the street. (误)
I was walking along the road and there were not so many vehicles on the street. (正)
5.动词语态误用
The driver of the red car was died in the accident. (误)
The driver of the red car died in the accident. (正)
6.词类混淆
It is my point that reading must be selectively. (误)
In my opinion, reading must be selective. (正)
Honest is so important for every person. (误)
Honesty is so important for everyone. (正)
7.名词可数与不可数的误用
In modern society, people are under various pressures(误)
In modern society, people are under various kinds of pressure. (正)
8.动词及物与不及物的误用
Because of his excellent performance, the boss rose his salary. (误)
Because of his excellent performance, the boss raised his salary. (正)
9.动宾搭配不当
We must make solutions to the problem. (误)
We must find a solution to the problem. (正)
It also may help you to make success. (误)
It may also help you succeed/obtain your goal. (正)
10.根据中文逐字硬译
Let us touch the outside world of campus.
Let’s keep in touch with the world outside of the campus.
Don’t forget to keep a good body health.(误)
Don’t forget to keep fit/healthy.(正)
二、如何减少错误?
1.打好腹稿再动笔,减少涂改。
2.书写漂亮的当然更好,达不到的最起码也要工整。
3.使用黑色水笔作答,白纸黑字,这样能够有效提高整洁度。
三、如何提高写作分数?
1.改变时态
The bell is ringing now. (一般)
There goes the bell! (高级)
2.改变语态
People suggests that the meeting be put off. (一般)
It is suggested that the meeting be put off. (高级)
3.使用不定式
He is so kind that he can do me a favor. (一般)
He is so kind as to do me a favor. (高级)
4.使用过去分词
Lisa walked out of the room and many guys followed her. (一般)
Followed by many guys, Lisa walked out of the lab. (高级)
5.使用v-ing 形式
When she arrives, please give me a call. (一般)
On her arriving, please give me a call. (高级)
6.使用名词性从句
She happened to have met him. (一般)
It happened that she had met him. (高级)
7.使用定语从句
The girl is spoken highly of. Her homework was well done. (一般)
The girl whose homework was well done is spoken highly of. (高级)
8.使用状语从句
I won’t believe what he says. (一般)
No matter what he says, I won’t believe. (高级)
9.使用虚拟语气
The patient didn’t die because there were the efforts of the doctor. (一般)
But for the efforts of the doctor, the patient would have died. (高级)
10.使用强调句型
I was born in 1987. (一般)
It was in 1987 that I was born. (高级)
11.使用倒装
Though I’m sick, I’ll carry on. (一般)
Sick as I am, I’ll carry on. (高级)
12.使用并列句
If you go through the gate, you’ll find me. (一般)
Go through the gate, and you’ll find me. (高级)
最后,让我们来看看高级词汇。词汇量的大小能体现你知识贮存量的多寡,也是衡量你英语水平的一个重要标志。
As a result, the plan was a failure. (一般)
The plan turned out to be a failure. (高级)
拓展:关于考研英语写作的分析
英语一写作:
写作部分由A、B两节组成,主要考察考生的书面表达能力,共30分。
A节:考生根据所给情景写出约100词(标点符号不计算在内)的应用性短文,包括私人和公务信函、备忘录、报告等,共10分。
B节:考生根据提示信息写出一篇160~200词(标点符号不计算在内)的短文。提示信息的形式有主题句、写作提纲、规定情景、图、表等,共20分。
英语二写作:
写作部分由A、B两节组成,主要考察考生的书面表达能力,共2题,25分。
A节:考生根据所给情景写出约100词(标点符号不计算在内)的应用性短文,包括私人和公务信函、备忘录、报告等,共10分。
B节:要求考生根据所规定的情景或给出的提纲,写出一篇150词以上的英语说明文或议论文。提供情景的形式为图画、图表或文字,共15分。
【失分点剖析】
任何一篇英语作文都应该包含以下五大层次:词汇、短语(搭配)、句子、段落和篇章。根据以往经验,写作难以取得高分的症结可以归纳于以下4点:
1、写作用词缺乏规范性。具体体现在习惯用法错误较多,词汇与词汇之间的搭配关系(包括修饰关系)错误较多,不符合英语表达习惯,同时出现了许多完全汉语式的表达。
2、基本语法错误较多。基本语法错误属于低级写作错误,一旦在考研英语试卷上出现,扣分将非常严重,甚至会降1~2个分数档次。常见的基本语法错误通常包括对英语的基本句型掌握不够熟练、应用能力较差、句子不完整等。
3、段落内或段落间缺乏连贯性与衔接性。英语文章非常讲究逻辑与段落展开,也就是通常所说的段落内部组织问题。而很多考生很少注意到这一点,从而导致在写作中很少使用句子之间的关系连接词以及段落之间的表示衔接关系的词汇与短语,给人一种句子之间杂乱无章、毫无头绪的感觉,造成不必要的失分。
4、写作用词、用句以及结构过于单一、缺乏变化。对于考研英语写作来说,语言的多样性是一项非常重要的衡量标准,而考生们由于平时备考时不注意积累好词好句,从而导致在考场上无词可用、无句可用,只能用一些平庸而单调的词汇、短语以及句型来应付,结果只能是得到一般的分数,甚至是低分。
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