留学推荐信写法和样例
篇一:出国留学推荐信:写法和样例
几乎所有的大学都会要求美国留学申请人提出推荐信(Recommendation Letter),评审委员借着推荐者的文字描述,可以了解申请人的背景状况。它可说明各种成绩单数字以外的其它意义,补充过于计量化、公式化审核的一种评估方式。 美国留学申请研究所一般要求三封推荐信推荐人的身份可以是曾经教你的教授,或是现(曾)职工作单位主管,自已视需要组合。例如,如果你毕业十年,你的推荐人可应有二封工作主管为宜,而毕业一两年顶多一封即足够。 推荐人的职务,并不一定愈高愈有利,相反地,认识你愈久而职称不高,内容又适当地表达你的个性(Personality),才是上乘的推荐。以下,我们将提供你推荐信需注意的要点,帮助你着手起稿推荐信:
(一)不要拖时间,尽快起草:推荐信需要时间写,何况又得配合老师的时间。所以尽快起草你的推荐信,以便使你的推荐者有充裕的时间,为你的推荐信效力。
(二)提供充份的信息给推荐者:如果你要推荐者能掌握你的优点,你得提供充份的信息。自然,要尽量具体避免空洞地陈述。同时,你也该提供你申请学校截止日期给推荐者参考,以免推荐者耽误了你的申请。
(三)各推荐信的打字书信字体,宜选不同的型式,以示不同的推荐者。属需要圈选的表格者,可以直接以手稿填入。
(四)在逻辑推理下,推荐者不可能知道或了解你的特质,请勿提及。譬如说,学生课外活动的表现就不适于平常教授正式科目的教授提及,除非教授也参与其中。又如其它课堂的表现,除非其它教授曾经提及过,否则不适合此科教授评论学生在其它科目的表现。再如,学生如何在图书馆查数据、写报告花费的时间,一般老师是不可能知之甚详,除非实在太特殊而略有耳闻,故也不适合在推荐信中提及。
(五)推荐信的内容尽量简短有力:不要虚无空洞的形容词,例如他任职于某公司时,勤劳、负责、认真、为人谦虚、诚恳等语句,不宜多引用,最好讲出具体事实,才不流于形式,尤其不要抄袭市面的书信范例,以免流于陈腔滥调,落入俗套。
(六)如果可能的话,推荐者最好与你修的科目或学校相关。譬如说:如果你将来计划主修英文,最好推荐人之一是英文老师。又如,如果你申请常春藤名校(IVY LEAGUE SCHOOL),推荐者若也是常春藤名校出身,则其推荐信将更有力。
(七)适当提及自己的“缺点”。一封推荐信如果阐述的完全是被推荐的同学的优点,不免让人觉得有粉饰之嫌,如果能恰当地加入一些“缺点”,不仅能令推荐信真实,还会通过“似贬实褒”,反而突出了被推荐人的特殊气质。例如计算机专业、数学专业乃至金融专业的同学,在推荐信中可以考虑加入这样的词句:“该生有时因为过分专注于研究工作而难以平衡生活各方面的关系,这不失为一种美中不足”。这句话似乎是在谈“缺点”,但很明显这样的“缺点”其实正是很多专业最渴望的“缺点”——废寝忘食的工作态度,从而使得“缺点”也为申请提供了巨大帮助。
推荐信包含的主要题材
(一)与申请者的关系:表达清楚何种方式认识。譬如说是老师、指导教授,老板等。说明交往多久,如果是教授学生关系,对教授的科目做一个简短的说明,如果推荐信者是你的老板(主管),请详细说明你的工作职责。
(二)推荐者对申请人人格个性特征的印象:譬如学习精神、工作态度、与同事(同学)相处的情形、组织领导能力、学术专长、研究能力、有无工作经验与否,并加注评语。
(三)推荐者对你能否顺利完成学位的看法:譬如说,描述你对特别分配职务上的表现,以表现你的应变能力。又如,申请者是否有其它潜力未发挥? 如果申请者的成绩未尽理想,评述你对申请者的看法。解释申请者虽然形式上的成绩未尽理想,却有极深厚的潜力尚未发挥。如果申请者转系,也可以强调申请者有强烈的学习动机,根据推荐者的观察,相信以申请者的表现,一定可以成功完成学业。
(四)推荐者对申请人人格个性特征的印象:譬如学习精神、工作态度、与同事(同学)相处的情形、组织领导能力、学术专长、研究能力、有无工作经验与否,并
加注评语。 (五)重述推荐者对申请人的支持及能力的确认,以再次肯定对申请人的支持与推荐。 美国留学申请推荐信的模式 推荐信的格式有些模式可循,以下将针对各段提供模式作参考:
(一)抬头可用的格式有: Dear Sir/Madam; To Whom It May Concern:
(二)第一段:引文句子可以引用如:
“It is a pleasure to recommend to you (name), a former student of mine at (name of university).”
“I an very happy to have this opportunity to recommend (name), who is presently applying for admission to your graduate (or undergraduate) program in (name of program).” “I understand that (name) is applying for admissions to your graduate (undergraduate) school, and has requested that I write this letter of recommendation for her/him.”
“In my capacity as professor at xxxx University, I have known xxx for three years, as both his/her advisor and professor.”
(三)第二段:这段可以提供最实质的内容。譬如,如果推荐者是教授, 解释学生在他门下所修的课程。
“(name) took two of my courses during the 1984-85 academic year, as follows; “xxxxx” and “xxxxx”.”
“(Name) was enrolled in three of classes from September 1984 to June 1986 “xxx” and “xxx”.” 接下来,教授写一些有关申请人在课堂上的表现,如完成的研究计划、实验室研究、研究报告、考试的成绩、课堂态度、讨论课的参与等,举出实例。 “
In my class (es), (name) did excellent work. She always listened attentively, participated activitely in class, and handed in very good written assignment. “In particular, his/her research paper on (topic) was of exceptionally high quality, and showed that s/he fully understands and has a strong background in his/her field.” 如果推荐人是工作主管,首先一定要仔细陈述申请人的工作职责,并对申请者工作表现作一评估。如果可能的话尽量列举实例。
“When (name) held the position of (job title) in this company she was one s/he was one of my best employees. His/her job responsibilities included (describe them), and s/he carried out his/her duties with exceptional skill and professionalism.”
“S/he not only did his/her own work, but also helped other employees, and made many valuable contributions to the efficient running to our firm.” 第二段最后一段:可以提及申请人在班上(或公司里)的'比较表现(譬如排名): “I was rate (name)'s academic ability as in the top 10% of his/her class.” “Compared against other students that I have taught, I would say that (name) ranks in the upper 10%. 接下来,推荐者可对申请人能否成功完成学业提出看法。举例: “Based on his/her previous performance, I am certain that (name) would be a very successful student at your university.” “I believe that (name) possesses all the qualities necessary to make an excellent graduate student in his/her chosen field, and am sure that s/he will make a fine addition to your campus.”
(四)第三段:如果还有其它话想说,请另写一段.例如:英文能力、沟通技巧、领导才能、特殊学术或工作背景。譬如说,如果申请人欲申请的科系是企管系,推荐者可着力描写他们有关申请人商业的专门技术、领导才能,以及申请者所参加的商业活动,例如,有关商业方面的组织社团。又如,申请人申请护理研究所,推荐者可着力描写他们关怀的态度、处理实验室的技能,或是对病人的奉献。
(五)最后,以几句结尾作总结; “Therefore, I am happy to highly and without reservation recommend (name) for admission to your graduate program. Your kind/serious consideration of his/her application would be most appreciated.” “I am thus pleased to give my full support and recommendation to (name)'s application for admission to your school. If any further information is required, please feel free to contact me.” 签名: Sincerely, Sincerely yours, Very truly yours, With best regards, 下面结合上面的部分内容,给出一篇推荐信样例(被推荐的同学是数学系的) Dear Sir/Madam: I am writing this letter of recommendation for Mr.Caleb,my former student. I have known Mr.
Caleb for more than 6 years since his freshman year at "University of Minnesota". At that time, he took the course-- "Mathematical Analysis," which I taught mainly for junior students majoring in Mathematics. To my surprise, I found he was among the few students in his class who could keep up with the pace of my lectures. Moreover, he often posed thought-provoking questions during the course. Thus it was natural that I liked discussing with this young man and became familiar with him. The more I knew him, the more I found he was talented at mathematics. As you can see, he got excellent scores on the course. In fact, he ranked No. 1 on this 270 hours course in the talented student class which has 34 intelligent others. With his outstanding talent and solid mathematical background, he also did quite well in most other courses during his undergraduate study. By the way, you may wonder why his undergraduate scores look not so good compared to other Chinese applicants. It is easy to explain, because he belonged to the talented student class, which were required to endure harder test papers and stricter grading than most other college students did at least at "University of Minnesota". He even served as Prof. Linda s Research Assistant for one year. No one could deny his commitment to his job. As a matter of fact, Prof. Linda s electronic lab happened to be neighboring my office and I could always see him working in the lab, either repairing the instruments or helping Prof. Linda collect lab reports. Maybe one more example will demonstrate his commitment more clearly. Once he suggested compiling a FORTRAN program to solve a complicated circuit problem in his class. In order to do that, he had to do a lot of computer work. However, because there were few computers available in our computer lab, he had to wake up at 5 a.m. in winter (please note: "Twin city" is a downtown near the north border of China, so it is pretty cold in winter and the heating system is not working very well.) to ensure the 1st position of the long waiting line for his classmates and himself! At last he and his classmates finished the program successfully with his great efforts. As to his personality, I would like to say Mr. Caleb is a warm-hearted, honest and upright student. He was always ready to help others. During my lectures, many students got confused at some points and I could always see Mr. Caleb help them explain during breaks. In the meanwhile, I must admit that Mr. Caleb was a bit impatient sometimes. Finally, I would like to conclude my recommendation as follows: frankly, Mr. Caleb is not a genius, but I promise his great intelligence, commitment to work and his kind nature will impress you deeply. Thus I recommend him without reservation for his admission and financial aid to your program. Please feel free to contact me if needed. Sincerely Yours, XXX
篇二:留学推荐信是自己写还是教授写
留学推荐信是自己写还是教授写?很多对于出国留学申请不是很清楚的同学对这个问题很是不解。我们写留学推荐信往往有两种方法:联系教授为自己写推荐信,自己写推荐信找老师签字。而网申传推荐信也是有两种方法:自己上传,请老师为自己上传。
在写推荐信和上传推荐信这两个过程中,保证推荐信的真实性,非常重要!!而申请的时候往往需要三封到两封推荐信。所以这其中的细节我们也必须注意!!
如果你联系的教授比较忙,没时间写推荐信,需要你自己写推荐信,然后找他签字。这种情况的话,一定要注意,推荐信的格式问题。比如说:你可能要准备三封推荐信,然后让老师签字。那么这三份推荐信的字体、字号、格式、板式、以及问候语、签字位置、落款时间等,都要有一定的差别。解决方法很简单,多找几种推荐信的模版,再根据自己的需求稍加改动就行了。
试想一想,国外大学招生的老师看到板式、字体、字号、问候语、落款日期都一样的推荐信,他会产生很大的质疑:三个老师写的推荐信都惊人的一样?? 可能是学生自己写的??
再说说上传的细节
网申的时候,最后我们要把推荐我们老师的邮箱写上去。系统会自动给老师的邮箱发送notification邮件。这封邮件中会有一个链
接,也就是最后上传的通道。
如果老师很忙,就需要我们自己上传推荐信。 这样的话,我们可以告诉老师把学校发送的notification email转发给我们,就可以自己上传啦。
上传不仅是我们校内微博上传头像那么简单,还需要有打分的项目。学校会有个类似的表格,会让推荐老师给学生各个方面的素质打分。这个地方要注意的是,我们不能都给自己打最高分(top 5%),太优秀,就太假了。也得有几个中等的评价。但是也不能为了真实,给自己打个最差的(lower than 5%)这样对申请不利!!
打完分,下面还会有一些老师对学生的评价,这里是可填可不填的。最好是填上,信息越完整,真实度就越高。在这个栏中,写一些对自己优点的肯定,但是也要写一点不足之处。这个不足,一定要不致命的。比如说:学习能力很强,但是缺乏实际操作经验。在处理突发事件的时候,有些稚嫩等等。
温馨提示:专业的事情,交给专业的机构来完成。10年来,监审留学一直致力于留学文书的写作服务,已经帮助过无数留学生申请到理想的大学,擅长美国,加拿大,英国和澳洲的个人陈述和推荐信写作。
上传的时间
假如你一天收到了三个老师转发过来的邮件, 晚上把这个链接一个接一个的打开,一个接一个的上传。这样的话,三个老师上传的时间(会显示出来)会相差不到五分钟的。 那么国外大学会想,怎么
就这么巧呢?!所以建议是,可以在一天把一个老师的推荐信给不同的大学上传,但是最好不要把不同老师的推荐信给一个大学上传。 留学推荐信是自己写还是教授写要根据自己和教授的实际情况来决定,最重要的是要保证推荐信看起来要真实,有说服力。
篇三:出国留学推荐信:写法和样例
几乎所有的大学都会要求美国留学申请人提出推荐信(Recommendation Letter),评审委员借着推荐者的文字描述,可以了解申请人的背景状况。它可说明各种成绩单数字以外的其它意义,补充过于计量化、公式化审核的一种评估方式。 美国留学申请研究所一般要求三封推荐信推荐人的身份可以是曾经教你的教授,或是现(曾)职工作单位主管,自已视需要组合。例如,如果你毕业十年,你的推荐人可应有二封工作主管为宜,而毕业一两年顶多一封即足够。 推荐人的职务,并不一定愈高愈有利,相反地,认识你愈久而职称不高,内容又适当地表达你的个性(Personality),才是上乘的推荐。
以下,我们将提供你推荐信需注意的要点,帮助你着手起稿推荐信:
(一)不要拖时间,尽快起草:推荐信需要时间写,何况又得配合老师的时间。所以尽快起草你的推荐信,以便使你的推荐者有充裕的时间,为你的推荐信效力。
(二)提供充份的信息给推荐者:如果你要推荐者能掌握你的优点,你得提供充份的信息。自然,要尽量具体避免空洞地陈述。同时,你也该提供你申请学校截止日期给推荐者参考,以免推荐者耽误了你的申请。
(三)各推荐信的打字书信字体,宜选不同的型式,以示不同的推荐者。属需要圈选的表格者,可以直接以手稿填入。
(四)在逻辑推理下,推荐者不可能知道或了解你的特质,请勿提及。譬如说,学生课外活动的表现就不适于平常教授正式科目的教授提及,除非教授也参与其中。又如其它课堂的表现,除非其它教授曾经提及过,否则不适合此科教授评论学生在其它科目的表现。再如,学生如何在图书馆查数据、写报告花费的时间,一般老师是不可能知之甚详,除非实在太特殊而略有耳闻,故也不适合在推荐信中提及。
(五)推荐信的内容尽量简短有力:不要虚无空洞的形容词,例如他任职于某公司时,勤劳、负责、认真、为人谦虚、诚恳等语句,不宜多引用,最好讲出具体事实,才不流于形式,尤其不要抄袭市面的书信范例,以免流于陈腔滥调,落入俗套。
(六)如果可能的话,推荐者最好与你修的科目或学校相关。譬如说:如果你将来计划主修英文,最好推荐人之一是英文老师。又如,如果你申请常春藤名校(IVY LEAGUE SCHOOL),推荐者若也是常春藤名校出身,则其推荐信将更有力。
(七)适当提及自己的“缺点”。一封推荐信如果阐述的完全是被推荐的同学的优点,不免让人觉得有粉饰之嫌,如果能恰当地加入一些“缺点”,不仅能令推荐信真实,还会通过“似贬实褒”,反而突出了被推荐人的特殊气质。例如计算机专业、数学专业乃至金融专业的同学,在推荐信中可以考虑加入这样的词句:“该生有时因为过分专注于研究工作而难以平衡生活各方面的关系,这不失为一种美中不足”。这句话似乎是在谈“缺点”,但很明显这样的“缺点”其实正是很多专业最渴望的“缺点”——废寝忘食的工作态度,从而使得“缺点”也为申请提供了巨大帮助。
推荐信包含的主要题材
(一)与申请者的关系:表达清楚何种方式认识。譬如说是老师、指导教授,老板等。说明交往多久,如果是教授学生关系,对教授的科目做一个简短的说明,如果推荐信者是你的老板(主管),请详细说明你的工作职责。
(二)推荐者对申请人人格个性特征的印象:譬如学习精神、工作态度、与同事(同学)相处的情形、组织领导能力、学术专长、研究能力、有无工作经验与否,并加注评语。
(三)推荐者对你能否顺利完成学位的看法:譬如说,描述你对特别分配职务上的表现,以表现你的应变能力。又如,申请者是否有其它潜力未发挥? 如果申请者的成绩未尽理想,评述你对申请者的看法。解释申请者虽然形式上的成绩未尽理想,却有极深厚的潜力尚未发挥。如果申请者转系,也可以强调申请者有强烈的学习动机,根据推荐者的观察,相信以申请者的表现,一定可以成功完成学业。
(四)推荐者对申请人人格个性特征的印象:譬如学习精神、工作态度、与同事(同学)相处的情形、组织领导能力、学术专长、研究能力、有无工作经验与否,并加注评语。
(五)重述推荐者对申请人的支持及能力的确认,以再次肯定对申请人的支持与推荐。 美国留学申请推荐信的模式 推荐信的格式有些模式可循,以下将针对各段提供模式作参考:
(一)抬头可用的格式有: Dear Sir/Madam; To Whom It May Concern:
(二)第一段:引文句子可以引用如: “It is a pleasure to recommend to you (name), a former student of mine at (name of university).” “I an very happy to have this opportunity to recommend (name), who is presently applying for admission to your
graduate (or undergraduate) program in (name of program).” “I understand that (name) is applying for admissions to your graduate (undergraduate) school, and has requested that I write this letter of recommendation for her/him.” “In my capacity as professor at xxxx University, I have known xxx for three years, as both his/her advisor and professor.”
(三)第二段:这段可以提供最实质的内容。譬如,如果推荐者是教授, 解释学生在他门下所修的课程。 “(name) took two of my courses during the 1984-85 academic year, as follows; “xxxxx” and “xxxxx”.” “(Name) was enrolled in three of classes from September 1984 to June 1986 “xxx” and “xxx”.”
接下来,教授写一些有关申请人在课堂上的表现,如完成的研究计划、实验室研究、研究报告、考试的成绩、课堂态度、讨论课的参与等,举出实例。 “In my class (es), (name) did excellent work. She always listened attentively, participated activitely in class, and handed in very good written assignment. “In particular, his/her research paper on (topic) was of exceptionally high quality, and showed that s/he fully understands and has a strong background in his/her field.”
如果推荐人是工作主管,首先一定要仔细陈述申请人的工作职责,并对申请者工作表现作一评估。如果可能的话尽量列举实例。 “When (name) held the position of (job title) in this company she was one s/he was one of my best employees. His/her job responsibilities included (describe them), and s/he carried out his/her duties with exceptional skill and professionalism.” “S/he not only did his/her own work, but also helped other employees, and made many valuable contributions to the efficient running to our firm.”
第二段最后一段:可以提及申请人在班上(或公司里)的比较表现(譬如排名): “I was rate (name)'s academic ability as in the top 10% of his/her class.” “Compared against other students that I have taught, I would say that (name) ranks in the upper 10%.
接下来,推荐者可对申请人能否成功完成学业提出看法。举例: “Based on his/her previous performance, I am certain that (name) would be a very successful student at your university.” “I believe that (name) possesses all the qualities necessary to make an
excellent graduate student in his/her chosen field, and am sure that s/he will make a fine addition to your campus.”
(四)第三段:如果还有其它话想说,请另写一段.例如:英文能力、沟通技巧、领导才能、特殊学术或工作背景。譬如说,如果申请人欲申请的科系是企管系,推荐者可着力描写他们有关申请人商业的专门技术、领导才能,以及申请者所参加的商业活动,例如,有关商业方面的组织社团。又如,申请人申请护理研究所,推荐者可着力描写他们关怀的态度、处理实验室的技能,或是对病人的奉献。
(五)最后,以几句结尾作总结; “Therefore, I am happy to highly and without reservation recommend (name) for admission to your graduate program. Your kind/serious
consideration of his/her application would be most appreciated.” “I am thus pleased to give my full support and recommendation to (name)'s application for admission to your school. If any further information is required, please feel free to contact me.” 签名: Sincerely, Sincerely yours, Very truly yours, With best regards,
下面结合上面的部分内容,给出一篇推荐信样例(被推荐的同学是数学系的) Dear
Sir/Madam: I am writing this letter of recommendation for Mr.Caleb,my former student. I have known Mr. Caleb for more than 6 years since his freshman year at "University of Minnesota". At that time, he took the course-- "Mathematical Analysis," which I taught mainly for junior students majoring in Mathematics. To my surprise, I found he was among the few students in his class who could keep up with the pace of my lectures. Moreover, he often posed thought-provoking questions during the course. Thus it was natural that I liked discussing with this young man and became familiar with him. The more I knew him, the more I found he was talented at mathematics. As you can see, he got excellent scores on the course. In fact, he ranked No. 1 on this 270 hours course in the talented student class which has 34 intelligent others. With his outstanding talent and solid mathematical background, he also did quite well in most other courses during his undergraduate study. By the way, you may wonder why his undergraduate scores look not so good compared to other Chinese applicants. It is easy to explain, because he belonged to the talented
student class, which were required to endure harder test papers and stricter grading than most other college students did at least at "University of Minnesota". He even served as Prof. Linda s Research Assistant for one year. No one could deny his commitment to his job. As a matter of fact, Prof. Linda s electronic lab happened to be neighboring my office and I could always see him working in the lab, either repairing the instruments or helping Prof. Linda collect lab reports. Maybe one more example will demonstrate his commitment more clearly. Once he suggested compiling a FORTRAN program to solve a complicated circuit problem in his class. In order to do that, he had to do a lot of computer work. However, because there were few computers available in our computer lab, he had to wake up at 5 a.m. in winter (please note: "Twin city" is a downtown near the north border of China, so it is pretty cold in winter and the heating system is not working very well.) to ensure the 1st
position of the long waiting line for his classmates and himself! At last he and his
classmates finished the program successfully with his great efforts. As to his personality, I would like to say Mr. Caleb is a warm-hearted, honest and upright student. He was always ready to help others. During my lectures, many students got confused at some points and I could always see Mr. Caleb help them explain during breaks. In the meanwhile, I must admit that Mr. Caleb was a bit impatient sometimes. Finally, I would like to conclude my recommendation as follows: frankly, Mr. Caleb is not a genius, but I promise his great intelligence, commitment to work and his kind nature will impress you deeply. Thus I recommend him without reservation for his admission and financial aid to your program. Please feel free to contact me if needed. Sincerely Yours, XXX
篇四:怎么写好留学申请推荐信
1、绝大多数推荐信实际上是学生自己撰写的,只要让推荐人大笔一挥,签上名字即可。
2、反正所有人的推荐信里都会夸夸其谈,说被推荐人是如何如何优秀,我只要一样照做就好了。
3、推荐信只是个形式,美国大学要不要录取我,还是要看我的考试分数说了算。
殊不知这样的心态,耽误了多少“潜力股”的大好前程。推荐信在整个申请过程中,起着至关重要的作用,它是申请者自我营销战略里至关重要的部分,一篇过于平淡的推荐信,很可能成为你申请材料里的一处硬伤,让你永无翻身之日。
本文,避免如中国政府外交辞令般“空洞”的言论,手把手教你如何准备大学申请时的推荐信,仔细阅读它,你也可以成为大学推荐信方面的专家。
一什么是“好”的推荐信?
一封好的推荐信,能够通过列举真实的,具有启发性的事例或者描述申请人在某方面具备的潜力和特长,与其余申请材料配合,进而支撑整个申请定位。使申请人在众多与自己条件相当,甚至比自己条件更优秀的申请群体中脱颖而出。但要注意,单单靠一封好的推荐信,很难达到被美国优秀大学录取的目的,推荐信讲究的是“与其余申请材料的呼应和配合”。
举例:申请者A和B具有同样优秀的成绩和背景,但C大学面临只能从A和B中录取一名学生的窘境。A和B都将自己定位为“善于观察,乐于助人并且具有领导才能的人”。并且都在申请短文中做出了体现。这时候,轮到推荐信出场了。
A的推荐信如下:“做为校长,我可以肯定的告诉您,A是我见过的最优秀的学生之一,她不仅成绩优异,而且善于观察,时常帮助需要她的同学,她还是我见过的非常有潜力的学生领袖。”
B的推荐信如下:“通过他的标准化成绩,我想各位已经清楚的看到他在学习上多么优秀,我在此不再累述。我想告诉录取委员会一件B给我留下深刻印象的事情。2011年,我们学校举办50周年校庆晚会,做为最值得信任的学生干部,老师们都同意此次活动交给B来组织,但是令我惊讶的是:B主动跑来找我,告诉我这件事情应该交给X同学。在我眼中,X向来是一个不善言辞的学生。但B说服了我,告诉我说:“X同学其实非常有创意,但因为他天性内敛,所以不敢表达自己,时常显的不自信,这次活动,是重塑X同学自信的大好机会。”我听取了他的意见,晚会举办的非常成功。我知道,在这个过程中,B投入了大量的精力,在幕后做了大量的工作,但他把荣誉都给了他的同学。这是一个多么善于观察,乐于助人而且有领导才能的孩子啊!
孰优孰劣,已分高下。各位,如果您是大学招生官,您会录取A还是B呢?
二大学录取材料里为什么必须包含推荐信?招生官希望从推荐信里得到什么信息?
自己对于自己的评价难免不够“客观”,推荐信的作用,在于招生官希望能够从第三方的角度,客观的了解申请者的情况。通常来说,招生官希望从推荐信里了解到的信息包括但不限于:
1、你在申请材料里讲述的是否都是事实
如果你的活动列表里完全没有任何参加公益活动的内容,你的推荐信里却提到你是一个热衷公益,十分有社会责任感的人,这就不免让招生官产生疑惑;如果你从来没有提到你在音乐方面有天赋,你的推荐信却告诉招生官你的钢琴比莫扎特弹的还好,这就是个笑话。
2、你的成就是否足以给别人留下深刻的印象
有些话自己说合适,有些话则是别人说合适。“谦逊”一直是中华民族的传统美德,我想很少有学生会在申请文书里让自己锋芒毕露。推荐信则提供了塑造你形象的大好机会。别人对你的褒奖往往更客观,更可信。
3、为申请材料中的“疑点”提供解释的机会
张同学在GRE考试中取得了1500分的好成绩,可他在学校数学课的平均成绩只有80分,这不免会让招生官觉得张同学不过是在考试中运气好而已。可是如果他的数学老师在推荐信中告诉招生官,张同学选修的数学课都是大学里开设的最难的课程,而他又是整个学校给分最严的老师,在他的课上,学生的平均分只有60。那么情况则完全不一样了。
4、对申请文书的内容做补充
这对于高中申请本科的同学尤其适用。推荐书中,有一个小文书是非常难于处理的,那就是“在你列出的活动中,哪一项对你最有意义,为什么?”这篇文书仅限150字。你会不会因为篇幅不够而感到苦恼?会不会因为没有写出你自己的全部想法而感到遗憾?这个时候,推荐信会是一个很好的补充。
5、为招生官客观的评价你提供全面的背景信息
中国的国情是特殊的。你费尽九牛二虎之力,考入了省重点高中,遗憾的是,你在这批学生中只能排名中等。这个时候,如果你不能在推荐里说明你们的学校是如何优秀,大概只有全省1%的尖子学生才能进入此高中,因此你虽然排名中等,但是你依然是最有竞争力的申请者,那么你就丧失了让招生官客观评价你的大好机会。
篇五:留学推荐信中文写作模板
尊敬的教授:
我是xxx的投资学教授xxx,曾经在她大三时候。得知她申请了贵校XXX硕士,我非常高兴能助她一臂之力,为她写这封推荐信。
Xxx是一个善于学习、思考的学生,勤奋认真并且自学能力较强,喜欢将课堂的理论知识运用到课外的实践中。比如,她在听完投资组合这节课后,她会通过了解分析她所在实习银行理财产品的投资组合进行计算、分析,并和我讨论按照这样比例进行投资的原因、风险与是否合理;她甚至会自学MATLAB软件,自己通过收集资料和学习编程设计模型,对其投资组合进行改进,通过数据计算得出最大的投资收益比例和组合,以达到收益的最大化。当她拿数据分析给我看的时候,让我觉得惊讶,因为一个普通的学生是不会深入了解实际中的理财产品是如何进行投资的。这说明李思琪同学具有较强的分析能力,以及认真细致的工作作风。
她的理论基础非常扎实,学习成绩也非常的优秀,在班级中一直名列前五,即便在整个年级中也始终保持前二十的记录。在我这门课程的期末总评中她还获得了93分的好成绩。
前些时候她告诉我,她准备继续读研进行深造,而研究方向也和金融投资相关。贵校一直是她梦寐以求的大学,有着良好的学习氛围和学术能力,所以我非常乐意向贵校正式推荐xxx同学到贵校学习。相信去贵校学习对于她来说是个非常好的选择,也相信以她的勤奋和专研的个性,一定能够在学术上取得更大的发展。
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